我的解析
1、我一到北京就给你打电话。
【我的翻译】I will call you as soon as I arrive at Beijing.
【标准答案】I will call you as soon as I arrive in Beijing.
【对比分析】介词的用法错误,复盘介词,整理思维导图
【解题思路】
- 内部关系:动作关系
- 句子时态:一般将来时
- 句子成分:I主语 will call谓语 you宾语 as soon as I主语 arrive in谓语 Beijing状语(时间状语从句).
2、直到我有了孩子,才意识到我的父母有多伟大。(思考一下)
【我的翻译】Until I have child, I realize that my parent is so great.
【标准答案】I didnʼt realize how great my parents were until I had a child.
【对比分析】not…until 直到…才!!!又忘记了。。。脑子啊脑子
【解题思路】
- 内部关系:动作关系
- 句子时态:一般过去时
- 句子成分:I主语 didnʼt realize谓语 how great表语 my parents主语 were系动词(how引导的宾语从句) until I主语 had谓语 a child宾语(until引导的时间状语从句).
3、她还在读书的时候她父母就去美国了。
【我的翻译】Her parents were going to American when she was study.
【标准答案】Her parents went to America while she was still at school.
【对比分析】时态,她父母去美国是过去,用过去时,我用的是过去将来时。用过去时即可。While与when 用哪一个?while强调同时发生,所以用while更合适一些
【解题思路】
- 内部关系:动作关系
- 句子时态:一般过去时
- 句子成分:Her parents主语 went to谓语 America状语 while she主语 was系动词 still at school表语(while引导的时间状语从句).
【拓展】when和while引导的时间状语从句区别
(一)、when,while都有“当……时候”的意思。
when既可表示某一点时间,也可以表示某一段时间。在when引导的时间状语从句中,其谓语动词可以是延续性的,也可以是非延续性的,可与主句中的谓语动词同时发生,也可在其后发生。例如:
1、I was just reading a book when she came into my room.
她走进我房间时,我正在看书。
2、Were you writing when the teacher came in?
老师进来的时候,你在写信吗?
3、When he was a child he was always trying out new ideas.
他小时候就常常试验一些新的设想。
(二)、while只能表示某一段时间,不能表示某一点时间。在while引导的时间状语从句中,其谓语动词只能是延续性的,而且也只能与主句中的谓语动词同时发生或存在。
例如:
1、While Jim was mending his bike, LinTao came to see him.
正当吉姆修自行车时,林涛来看他。
2、You can’t do your homework while you’re watching TV.
你不能一边看电视一边做家庭作业。
(三)、另外,when和while的区别还在于:while引导的时间状语从句多用进行时态,而when
引导的时间状语从句多用一般时态。
例如:
1、While they were talking, the bell rang.
正在他们谈话的时候,上课铃响了。
2、I was doing my homework when my mother came back home yesterday evening.
昨天晚上妈妈回家的时候,我正在做家庭作
4、他把车停错了地方,因此被罚了款。
【我的翻译】He didn't park the car at right place, so he was fined.
【标准答案】He parked in the wrong place, so he was fined.
【对比分析】差不多
【解题思路】
- 内部关系:动作关系
- 句子时态:一般过去时
- 句子成分:He 主语parked谓语 in the wrong place状语, so he主语 was fined谓语(结果状语从句).
5、我不记得他请过一天假。
【我的翻译】I didn’t remember he had take the day off.
【标准答案】I can't remember his taking a single day off work.
【对比分析】我用的从句答案使用的时动名词
【解题思路】
- 内部关系:动作关系
- 句子时态:一般现在时
- 句子成分:I主语 can't remember谓语 his taking a single day off work宾语.
6、把你放大镜借我用用。(提示词:magnify)
【我的翻译】Please lend me your magnified-glass.
【标准答案】Lend me your magnifying glass.
【对比分析】动名词作定语!!! 分词与动名词复盘!!!
【解题思路】
- 内部关系:动作关系
- 句子时态:一般现在时
- 句子成分:Lend 谓语me间宾 your magnifying glass直宾.
7、这种情况要小心处理。
【我的翻译】This matter needs careful handling.
【标准答案】The situation requires careful handling
【对比分析】
【解题思路】
- 内部关系:动作关系
- 句子时态:一般现在时
- 句子成分:The situation 主语requires谓语 careful handling宾语。
8、这是一个不争的事实。(想想 “不争” ,该怎么脱壳?)
【我的翻译】No one will doubt the fact.
【标准答案】This is a proven fact.
【对比分析】我的翻译不对,没有人将要怀疑事实,与题意不符合!答案太完美,这是一个已经被证实过的事实。
【解题思路】
- 内部关系:描述关系
- 句子时态:一般现在时
- 句子成分:This主语 is系动词 a proven fact表语.
9、听到一个奇怪的声音,他们停止了谈话
【我的翻译】Hearing a strangely sounds, they stop talking.
【标准答案】Hearing a strange sound, they stopped talking
【对比分析】停止发生在过去,所以应该用过去时
【解题思路】
- 内部关系:动作关系
- 句子时态:过去进行时
- 句子成分:Hearing a strange sound伴随状语, they主语 stopped谓语 talking宾语
10、尽管受了伤,那名战士仍然继续作战。
【我的翻译】Although hearted,the solder is still fighting.
【标准答案】Wounded, the soldier continued to fight.
【对比分析】我用的描述关系,答案使用的动作关系。复盘状语!!!
【解题思路】
- 内部关系:动作关系
- 句子时态:一般过去时
- 句子成分:Wounded让步状语, the soldier主语 continued谓语 to fight宾语.
【拓展】如果你写成了 even though… 不算错
此句的知识点在于分词。
因为 “受伤”是一个被动概念,故用过去分词
但此句完全可以写成 Even though the soldier was wounded, he continued to fight.
但只用一个 wounded 即可表达同样的意思,更简洁。
虽然没用 even though, 但也表达了 “让步”,代替了让步状语从句
所以越学到后面,就会发现各个口语语法点,是相互支撑与串联的关系
我的问题
她还在读书的时候她父母就去美国了。
【我的翻译】Her parents were going to American when she was study.
【标准答案】Her parents went to America while she was still at school.
【对比分析】时态,她父母去美国是过去,用过去时,我用的是过去将来时。用过去时即可。While与when 用哪一个?
【问题】该题用when也可以嘛?
我不记得他请过一天假。
【我的翻译】I didn’t remember he had take the day off.
【标准答案】I can't remember his taking a single day off work.
【对比分析】我用的从句答案使用的时动名词
【问题】his taking a single day off work句子成分不会分析了,整体做宾语,再划分的时候不是很明白