上次月考炸的很惨。
虽然阅读全对，但是语法填空错了5个，应用文只有5分，读后续写只有12分（我也不知道为什么）
上次月考的应用文的修改版如下：
It contains 3 sections:introduction of some types of sports in Winter Olympics,illustrious athletes in China’s history,famous destinations and delicacies in BeiJing.
Not only will you get useful knowledge in our wallpaper,but you will also feast your eye on the elaborate design,which is the highlight of our paper.First of all,our newspaper contains riddle of sport which is in China-style shaped framework.What’s more,the wallpaper contained some joke in sport history,which’ll make you happy.
It’s no doubt that our newspaper is impressive and fascinating.Dear classmates,please vote for us and help us win the poll!
点评：1.作文结构较为清楚，每个段落都包含了一个要点。
原作文要点不清晰且未分段。
2.文章的词汇足够完成任务，且尝试使用多样化的单词，如：sections,introduction,illustrious,delicacy,feast your eye,elaborate,highlight,riddle,framework,impressive,fascinating,vote,poll,destination.
3.文章尝试使用逻辑连接符号：first of all,what’s more.
4.文章有尝试使用复杂句式。
5.但是文章书写太差，很可能拿不了高分。